I liked how you put dialouge from the text in your essay
Amazing job! I like how you showed you proved your point by adding dialogue.
I like how clear you were.I like the dialogue you added from the story
I loved how you used a universal truth statement at the beginning of the story in your introduction. AMAZING JOB ❤️💕💖💓😘♡!!!!!!!!!!
I like your reasons that you gave
l like related it to your daily life
Awesome job! Your voice was loud and clear, and you added great examples! You should maybe hook the reader a little bit more in the introduction, but it was still amazing!
I liked how you put dialouge from the text in your essay
ReplyDeleteAmazing job! I like how you showed you proved your point by adding dialogue.
ReplyDeleteI like how clear you were.
ReplyDeleteI like the dialogue you added from the story
I loved how you used a universal truth statement at the beginning of the story in your introduction. AMAZING JOB ❤️💕💖💓😘♡!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like your reasons that you gave
ReplyDeletel like related it to your daily life
ReplyDeleteAwesome job! Your voice was loud and clear, and you added great examples! You should maybe hook the reader a little bit more in the introduction, but it was still amazing!
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